athletics
last month makauri school had athletics day. i was nervous as a wreck i did not want to do the event.
in the morning i got ready for athletics jumped in the car and we were off to school.
the first mini block went too quick. it was already high jump i got into the first round but went out on the 2nd round. but it felt like forever
finally it was shot put. I ran over to the other event where Mr s was standing. i was first in line and did a striking shot that after 4 people the 5th person finally jade beat me. i came 4th in shot put.
i did not too good in long jump but i came fourth in the two laps.
i think i did good i athletics afterall.
Kia Ora Pippa, my names Lily and I go attend Gisborne intermediate. I like how you told your day in a great way, it makes me feel how I was on Athletics day. One thing you could work on is basically rereading your writing and putting capital letters in the right spot.
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